he had no answer
for her question.
no, he had none.
“I’ve come to save you,”
she smiled,
a very wide smile,
indicating what she
was about say
should have been
common sense –
obvious.
still, he stood quiet
and numb.
“would you rather I walk
and leave you to suffer –
this ceaseless ache?”
string – she finally
stuck a cord.
ignoring the pain
in a deep husky
note he spoke,
“but, how?
how can you save me?
i am a man made glass
pain is not separate from me
this ache is who I am.
I have been boiled and bubbled,
cooled and simmered,
I was a molten liquid once,
molded into this mortal state.
having been
torched and toiled,
I have survived
for as long as I can –
not because I am weak.
no, you have to understand
i’d rather be pierced
a million times – and again
salvation is not what I seek.”
__________________To Be Continued__________________
If he seeks not salvation, what does he seek?
Let me know what you think!
Love,
Rose
Lovee!!
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Thank you, Jas! I am glad you enjoyed reading.
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Very welcome, i did your works are amazing.
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Thank you once again. It’s an honour to know that you feel that way!🌹
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Haha very welcome(again) and the honor is mine! 😊
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😂❤️
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Oops*🌹☺️
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Haha 😊
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The momentum is there again. Novel material. Well done
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I am taking the lazy way out. Easier to write poetic prose than writing a novel.
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I agree! 🙂
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Mhm, I hope you had a wonderful weekend. ☺️🌹
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I did thank you and likewise
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I did too. Thank you kindly.
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🙂
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“I have been boiled and bubbled,
cooled and simmered,
I was a molten liquid once,
molded into this mortal state.” — wow what a description! It seems to me that he seeks experiences. That is what pain is to him, an experience that cames from his glass state. If he loses that, what will he experience? Will he cease to exist? Very deep.
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I never plan what I write. This guy just wrote himself. It’s very interesting – your take on him. Let’s see what happens next. I am not sure if even I know.
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I’ll bet it’ll be wonderful. 🙂 I’ll be waiting to read it 🙂
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Ooooh
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You like? 🙂
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Of course. 😊
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Thank you🌹☺️❤️
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Beautifully written. I loved the description and imagery. Very thought provoking. ❤️
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