In his tightly
held embrace,
the beautiful rose
began to dissipate.
The atmosphere turned dark.
In seconds
the temperature dropped
a degree or ten.
A strong gust of wind
passed them by;
the earth beneath their feet,
silently quivered.
No heed was paid.
her velvety red petals
began to scatter,
here and there;
everywhere.
Within moments she was
transformed,
into a scarlet storm.
A tornado of red,
surrounding the
man made of glass.
The fury of nature, –
unleashed.
For the longest while
not a thing could heard
or seen.
An age might have passed,
before the things began to calm.
He was certain,
he heard a loud gasp.
The rose was no longer
in his arms.
He looked at his empty hands
surprised,
he could feel no pain.
He lifted arms,
then his legs,
surprised at ability to flex.
The dark crimson rose
had given up herself –
merged with him;
the two
becoming
one flesh.
_______________________ THE END___________________
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Let me know what you guys think! Love y’all.
~ Rose
Wow. Love this.
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Thank you, Sarah!🌹❤️
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Oh wow! Breathtaking ending! ❤️❤️❤️
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Thanks, Jennifer! I hope you had a chance to read the last bit as well.☺️🌹
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I did! You’re so sweet! ❤️😘
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Just as you are! ❤ 🙂
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Awww 💜💜💜
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❤
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This is really nice and love your punchy ending
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Thank you, kind sir. The ending was written before the story even began.!🌹
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Sometimes that is the way it happens for me as well as titles. How are you doing?
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Mhm! I have had a rough week. Trying to get out the funk. I hope yours was better.
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Well I hope this week from now on in is better for you. Yes I had a good week. thanks for asking
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Thank you!🌹
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You’re welcome
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I love that image and I love the ending. 🙂
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Me too. The image had to do a lot with how it ended. I am happy I finally finishes something! lol~!
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Is it really the end? 😉
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For this. Yes. No worries.. there will be more where this came from. 🙂 Who know’s may be I’ll turn this into a novel one day.
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yay for more! If you do make this a novel, let me know so I can buy it and read it!
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Oh my. Beautiful. ❤
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Thanks, darling! xx
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My pleasure, Rose. ❤
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I read the first one when it was first posted. Have not read the last three until tonight.
Reread the entire series. Damn good! Love how you told the story. Very poetic.
Bravo👏👏👏
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Thank you so very much, kind sir. Your words and appreciation means a lot. Thank you once again for taking the time to read. 🙂
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Hey – I red (sic) it all and approve dramatically of the image and the book-ish climate of the exchange between glass and botany to remove stains from the soul.
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Thank you! 🙂
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