Words and pic paint a gorgeous picture of change and searching… And I love the use of the long and short “A” sounds in this poem, not just the rhyme, but the repetition throughout. Nicely done! 🙂
A very interesting commentary on seekers. Whatever we hold most dear is what we worship. The opening line was wonderful, it really pulled me in to the story.
Romancing Life 
Beautiful
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Thank you kindly!🌹
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I love this poem. I love your presentation. And, I love your blog.
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Thank you so very much, Jack! I really appreciate you taking out the time to read and provide such wonderful feedback.
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Words and pic paint a gorgeous picture of change and searching… And I love the use of the long and short “A” sounds in this poem, not just the rhyme, but the repetition throughout. Nicely done! 🙂
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Thank you, Joan! I am happy to hear that you could pick up on that! Thank you once again for reading and leaving such wonderful feedback! 🙂
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A very interesting commentary on seekers. Whatever we hold most dear is what we worship. The opening line was wonderful, it really pulled me in to the story.
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